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Japenese poetry, consisting normally of three lines- 5 x 7 x 5 syllables.

See what you can come up with...




-Within the tree top

Urinations sudden urge

Tiny yellow drops
 
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Mr. Sir

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From my lofty perch

I see beyond the hedges

Sunbathing beauty
 
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-Wet line running knot

Muddy water on my lap

Climbing in the rain
 
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Out to the branch tips
Feeling so free, here I go
Sudden rush of fear
 
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-Oh my aching back

Might as well call Workman’s Comp

It’s thrown out again.
 
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clumsy worker
always careless in your job
brother, can you spare a dime?
 
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a clumsy worker
always careless in your job
brother, spot me ten
 
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still ain't right snarfman
its five seven five ok
time to try again
 

hmm

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live from this small town
the mighty hemlocks fall dead
and the bands play on
 
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Sticks whip past my face
The searing pain hurts so bad
You suck, chuck 'n duck









:big-jump: :rockon: I did it, I did it, uh huh. uh huh

Bow down to me now
Kneel down to the one you serve
For I am your king!
 

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In all my travels
The two things my eyes scout for
Are trees and water
 

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here comes a light rain
the temps are well below freezing
we'll work tomorrow
 

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the limbs are heavy
crisp snow crunchs under my feet
my silks keep me warm
 

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edited to be weather correct

here comes a light snow
the temps are well below freezing
we'll work tomorrow

thanks paul

remember - i live in the south where we do not have snow or freezing weather
 
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