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Naturarbo

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Hi please all english speakers, read,correct and upgrade.I am makin a flyer for recreational tree climbing.Text shouldn't be much longer then this.
"THE ULTIMATE BACK TO NATURE DAY!
Recreational tree climbing develops visual & physical coordination & it's a superb experience for schools, families, campsites & team building events.
Climb a tree supervised by a team of fully certified & insured tree climbers that will guaranty a safe CLIMB TO THE TOP!
NOW AVALIABLE TO EVERYONE!"
thanks in advance
 
Recreational tree climbing develops visual & physical coordination. Climbing is a superb experience for schools, families, campsites & team building events.

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Hi. To all English speakers, please read, correct and upgrade. I am making a flyer for recreational tree climbing.The text shouldn't be much longer than this.



THE ULTIMATE BACK TO NATURE DAY!
Recreational tree climbing is FUN and develops courage, strength and coordination. It is a superb experience for students, families, campers, & for team-building events.
Rope up and Climb a Tree, supervised by a team of fully certified & insured tree climbers that will guarantee a safe CLIMB TO THE TOP!
NOW AVAILABLE TO EVERYONE!"


Thanks in advance.








Hey! Remind us of your name again, please.

If you haven't read it before, Stig has amazingly developed his written and spoken English through participation in the Tree House.


We'd like to see more Portuguese trees/ palms/ life.
 
Your posts here have been great, Filipe! Like Sean said, we'd love to see what you're up to.

The text of your flyer in post #6 is great!
 
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